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Friday, September 8, 2023

Nap Causes Bear Jam

Natural History Note: People may manage this land, but the bears own it. And they have the right-of-way even when napping. When a bear impedes the progress of people the rangers refer to it as a “bear jam.”


After a meandering graze through a salad of tall marsh grass, she sits by the water, rests her head.  Eyes closed until a conspiracy of wind and blade brush her nose.  She bites the green ticklers without a change of posture and chews back to dreams.

Linger on the bridge
to avoid the fate of grass
mown down in slumber.

 

Form Editorial: The prose in a Haibun traditionally is objective: personal pronouns are eschewed.  Here I strove for that and reduced the passage from 178 words to less than 50.  It took me the good part of an hour to get there: word jam? 

2 comments:

  1. Where else but in Alaska would bear jam be part of the vernacular? It may be autumn canning season but this local bear jam contains no sugar.

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